Tea Time With Mr. Winter (an excerpt)

Winter park_iphone _new years eve_christmas_santa_wallpaper_1Remember last post we talked about my writing shorties? Here is an excerpt of one of them. I don’t know how you feel about the amount of snow you’ve had in your neck of the woods, but here, it’s caused us to miss a friend’s play, a day of work, untold errands and several trips to the tanning bed. :) At any rate, it spawned another shorty for my collection.

“Isn’t it glorious?” he asked. He didn’t need an answer, he was so enamored by the twinkling and sparkling and dazzling white. Not bleach white, but halogen purity on display straight from heaven. I took a deep breath and decided to be honest.

“Frankly, I’m sick of it, Mr. Winter. We’re all sick of it.”

“Ingrate!” he gasped. I served him a plate of egg whites with sautéed white mushrooms and white onions, sprinkled with white pepper. His white gloved hand took the plate and his fork poked at the eggs in search of offending yolk. He found none, and satisfied, took a bite. With his mouth full, he asked, “Do you have white toast?”

I handed him the breadbasket filled with unbuttered toast halves, practically raw toast; it didn’t look as much like toast as dry bread.

“Even Boston and Buffalo are weary.”

“Bite your tongue!” he rarely looked at me, so enamored was he with the snow-globe effect beyond the glass.

“Face it, you’re getting lazy and sloppy. Seven feet in one day? We all know that you normally dole it out in inches and maybe a foot plus in the higher altitudes. Seven feet in Boston? That’s just pure unadulterated laziness.”

Please let me hear from you if you would like to see more excerpts!

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The Long and The Short: A Truce

Buchler_ShortStories-Cambs47c93Most days I lock myself in my little writing closet and I don’t come out until I’ve made significant headway on something, usually the book I’m working on. Currently, I split my time between two books in a series. I had finished the first draft of book number one and really didn’t like it much. The majority of my read-through tribe had a really tough time getting past the first few chapters. I knew something was seriously wrong and I had to admit, the beginning of the book was as dull as watching cats sleep.

In order to have a sharper story, some great scenes would have to be cut, story holes correctly filled and extraneous rabbit trails eliminated. Some points of the story, if I’m brutally honest, were not the least believable. While pruning, rewriting and revising, it occurred to me how long it could take to get my name out there by writing books alone. It takes me about a year to write a rough draft between working, family time and other obligations. Another six months to get it to the editing stage. Even though I write every day, no one sees much of it until a full length book is completed.

Hey, what about all those story ideas I’ve been stockpiling? What if I wrote short stories too?? At times it has been helpful to have another, completely different story to work on while I noodle through a scene in the book that is problematic. This line of thinking triggered The Great Divide, A Novelette. It was how I managed to get Until Rodanthe published.

Lately I have more ideas that just refuse to be shelved and I find myself working on them in my head. Then, I have to write down what I know of it on any given day. I try to keep them short and sharp. I started a file specifically for story ideas I want to explore.

Maybe, as an experiment, I’ll start sending them out. I like the idea of sending out stories. Who knows, maybe something great will happen. Who knows, maybe I will even get paid!

What are you doing with the story ideas you have floating around in your mind?

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Keep Your Head in the Clouds

cloudheartYou work long hours carving your words into an image, finding just the right verbs, the perfect turn of phrase, the most excellent comebacks. Your dialog is sharp, your prose is perfect, and your imagery is breathtaking. Writing your book has been a labor of love, something you feel almost paternal about. After all, you’re giving birth to something important. Then, in a moment, it disappears.

You’re gasping in shock. But–!

If you write long enough, your chances of enduring endure a writing disaster of one kind or another seem inevitable.

With the introduction of cloud services, this may seem like a no brainer to you. I’m from the ancient era of saving documents on your computer, emailing them to yourself, copying them on discs (CD’s not floppies. I’m not that old!) or jump drives. Even then, it is of utmost importance to pay attention.

Just recently, the book I’ve been working on for over a year had finally reached a critical revision stage. I’d taken 30 days off, (the NaNoWriMo break!) and went back to it with a fresh perspective. I had been working on it sporadically for six weeks. Somehow during a national novel writing frenzy, I’d managed to copy the book from the cloud and onto my desktop. A fact I didn’t realize until I woke up one cold January morning and found my computer blank-screened and beeping, instead of booting up.

None of those weeks of revisions had been backed up. Normally, I depress the panic button if I’ve worked for 30 minutes and lose those tweaks; six weeks was beyond anything I could wrap my head around. Some of you remember my panic over an enormous file loss (all of my written work for nearly ten years. See link at the end of this post.)

Instead of flipping out, I comforted myself with the knowledge that I’d managed to move all book related projects to a specific memory stick and Dropbox. My life wasn’t over or even delayed. I had options of retrieval to pursue and in play. They involved a few less costly repairs (how does RAM go bad??) And once again, two weeks later, I got my book revisions back. I can’t press this enough. Save everything. Find a way to schedule file saving and /or work out of a cloud.

Click here to read about another saga regarding backing up files… Unlikely Houseguest

What are you doing to save your precious hours of writing?

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The Care and Feeding of Dreams

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Ocean of Dreams Josephine Wall

Well, I’d be lying if I told you that I wasn’t more than a little bit proud of getting a writing gig at the very tail end of December. I met with a couple of musicians who were in need of brief biographies, one of them for an imminent website launch. (See the link for the finished bio at the end of this post.)

It was a pleasant surprise to be invited to the CD release party of a new rising singer songwriter. Giddy with excitement, it was all I thought about for hours until I finally arrived at the party location.

There is something really precious about seeing someone so young at the very beginning of their potential. She was hopeful and talented, grounded, gracious and professional. It inspired me, reverberated within me. She had a tribe of people in attendance who believed in her and she had an unwavering belief in herself.

And actually, being there shook up something else in me.

In the recent past, I’d wondered at some of the directions I’d found myself going. Dare I say, not so hopeful, dark, dystopian and even… jaded. (GASP!) I didn’t used to be like that. I never wanted to become that way. My motto used to be, girls just want to have fun. Somewhere along the way, insidiously, that sentiment took a back seat. Living or working in a negative environment can be draining to the point that you’re ready to trade in your dreams for one sunny day.

Life is funny, though, and it seems true nature is always at work trying to reveal who we really are. It’s sad that sometimes we forget and need reminding. And it’s just huge when the reminders come in like joy parade. Encouraging friends, or relatives or acquaintances.

After significant changes in my life a few short years ago, my writing got back on track and I thought my skies looked a lot brighter. I felt happier. Things were beginning to click.

But compared to this new artist, I felt like Dorothy in the black and white world before entering the amazing land of Oz. When I left the party, I felt like I’d been handed my own slice of Technicolor pie. Here, feast your dream on this!!! I remembered another motto I once held dear, Dream Big. It’s free!

Being at the CD release party was like swimming in an Ocean of positivity. I’ve been on a cloud, smiling, happy for a few days and it took me a while to realize, I haven’t been surrounding myself with enough creative, positively expressive people and I miss it. I like being around people who aren’t afraid to dream gigantic dreams, people who are shooting high. They’re so much fun. And, I guess, I’m back to girls just want to have fun.

I’m looking forward to the new year and a lot more creative people to share it with.

By the way, check out the Bio on www.LizzieZink.com. Hope you’re dreaming up a great New Year!

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Breath New Life or Lay to Rest?

A Christmas-CarolI spent November away from my Dancer’s Tale novel. During that break, I thought I had an epiphany. And, in a way, I did. I actually considered welding the first and second novels together. I spent a few depressing days considering my options. But, after much deliberation, and a book that helped me considerably (See the link at the end of this post) Elizabeth Lyons showed me why that would be a particularly bad idea. (Lopsided on protagonists and split loyalties).

In the end, my true Epiphany, after talking to my editor over dinner, was that my opening chapter needs another look and some serious revisions. Whew! (Don’t tell anyone I had already started weaving the two together!) Is that all?

Well, that sounds easy, fortunately I happen to love revisions. Without a fascinating first line, paragraph, page, chapter not many people aren’t interested in turning pages. Rare is the one who wants to read an exciting book past a dull opening. And I had it in spades. Can I be honest? I didn’t like my opening at all.
Revisions are the answer. A trajectory shift. Not a 180, heck not even a 90. You might be surprised how much difference a subtle shift of one degree would make.
It isn’t necessary to shuffle the bones of the book, just a few tweaks. It will take time, like dieting takes time, but, I was glad for this little reference gem: Manuscript Makeover by Elizabeth Lyon.
If you haven’t begun a reference book stash, this is not a bad first book to snag for your shelf. If you’re serious about writing, it won’t take you long to accumulate a dozen or so titles. Over the course of the next few months, I will share the ones I have found most helpful. I hope you will share yours with me too!

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Setting Obtainable Goals

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Last week, there were days that I just sat in front of my computer willing the words (any words) to appear on the screen. I tried squeezing coherence from my brain, pressing letterized thought through my fingertips and… I was choking on mid-story sag.

During those times, I felt like the kid who can’t leave the table until they eat their peas. Go sit at your desk and when you get 1,666 words, you can come out and socialize. Some days the whole experience took hours. Mind you, I have a day job, I have responsibilities. Some people in my house wanted to eat. (Not now! I’m NaNo-ing!)

Writing can be hard. Your little editor might be screaming about how worthless the story is, or you don’t feel anything in the direction you’ve chosen to go. In those moments, I usually back up to where I felt passionate and look for other possible directions.
I wanted to crank out two thousand words a day for several personal reasons, to be finished early (someone has to cook Thanksgiving dinner!) and because giving myself an insane cushion of time (working 4 days ahead of schedule) I start to believe I can actually finish this thing. Not just finish, I can WIN.

In my NaNoWriMo project, I’m pulling from a lifetime of experiences, what I’ve heard and read and been told from many other individuals. It gets a little dicey.
But, the NaNoWriMo first draft doesn’t have to be perfect—it’s a first draft. I could excise huge sections of this after I hit my 50k. So why do I balk? Even though running days ahead of schedule –and it’s a comfy little cushion– I can almost hear the barking dogs of failure coming for my heels. I must press on!

Maybe you need to crank out 1900 more words today. Where will they come from? Maybe you’ll grab some mood music. Something a little dreamy, a little tech-y and a little cutting edge. (Maybe a prompt book…)
My character grapples with standing on her own, walking away from a toxic relationship and a destructive past and still looks uncertainly over her shoulder—would the relationship ever recover?
Finally, after consistently showing up to the page, the muse relents.
I finally have a first draft.
I have the voice of the story.
The bones reveal themselves! It’s not pretty, but it’s done.

I’ve reached just over 50 thousand words, which means I get to have Thanksgiving with my family. I get a few days to breathe before the next challenge. I have another book in my folder.
I love NaNoWriMo.

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Hanging in there for the good stuff

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So now that National Novel Writing Month is well underway, I’ve started out like gangbusters. The idea is fresh and new and has jillions of possibilities. Anything can happen. But what happens when you hit a wall? Like, in week two?

You run out of ideas on your story, what next? Well, my personal hard and fast rule is, don’t bail! If you have another idea for a story, jot it in your idea file, but as much as possible, don’t abandon ship on your original. I find that working on a story is a lot like working on a puzzle, and just because I can’t find the missing piece doesn’t mean I give up and start a new one.

A lot of times if you can distract yourself, get a drink of water, get a snack, go exercise for 20 minutes. Or 30. Give your mind a chance to mull things over and see what comes next. You would be surprised at what breaks through, if you just stick with it.

Maybe you’ve been trying to write in a linear way, holding on to a juicy scene that’s coming later in the story. Write it today and get your word count. I have a nice little book from by Maisel & Maisel called What Would Your Character Do? It’s a great treasure trove of questions that you can ask about your character that can go into their back story. Who are your characters friends? How long have they known each other? Who are your character’s enemies? What caused that relationship? Does your character have a love interest? Just lost one?

There are a lot of ways to get 50 thousand words. Sometimes I get writing prompts and use them for the story, or the antagonist. Everyone loves a good enemy. I decided to take a break and write this post to let you know that everyday won’t be easy writing. Today is one of my harder days. I get up walk around, do laundry, go to the store and come back to the page. I write a little more, look at a question or two and try find out more about them. If I don’t get anywhere, I go for a walk or exercise. Getting your blood moving really helps your thinking.

Another thing I have tried is writing a letter to your character, or writing a letter to someone as your character. Well, I cleared my head and feel ready to get back to the page. If you are doing NaNo, please feel free to look me up!

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